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Optimism of the knight by Lumen-Terra Optimism of the knight by Lumen-Terra
It's a screenshot redraw I did this evening because I could not focus on anything else. The background was improvised but I like it better this way. 
I'd like a critique on my shading and color technique please.
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:iconleadermegatron:
Optimus Prime is good Hero in Transformers . One of Knight of Cybertron
The last knight is Megatron his exfriend in Transformers. I love him.
His saves our planet. Optimus Prime died in Transformers 2.
Optimus Prime is baddy hurt in Transformers 4. He was hurt in Transformers 3.
He was lost in Transformers 1. Optimus Prime is villain in Transformers Last Knight
He was fail in space in Transformers last Knight. He kills lot of Deceptions. and Megatron save Optimus Prime in Transformers Last Knight. He admire Bee in Transformers Last knight. All autobots are very angry and lead Hot Rod.
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:iconstopmotiontk421:
Stopmotiontk421 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Very good. :) 
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:iconlumen-terra:
Lumen-Terra Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
Thank you. :D
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:iconstopmotiontk421:
Stopmotiontk421 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome. ^_^
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:iconrazziembessai:
RazzieMbessai Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Now I am very confused... I must always punch Optimus in the face, but this one is so pretty! :D
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:iconlumen-terra:
Lumen-Terra Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
Thank you. I had to use Optimus for this. Decepticons -and especially Megatron- are too grey to practice coloring on. :lmao: 
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:iconlogicalconclusions:
LogicalConclusions Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2017  Student General Artist
Neat work, The bayverse Transformers are not easy to draw.
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:icondrawerlous-drawer:
Drawerlous-drawer Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Oooohh!! That looks cool :'D
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:iconlogicalconclusions:
LogicalConclusions Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2017  Student General Artist
It does.
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:icondrawerlous-drawer:
Drawerlous-drawer Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Sorryyy, I accidentally replied to this. (':
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:iconlogicalconclusions:
LogicalConclusions Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2017  Student General Artist
I know, It's okay, It's better than posting a comment on your own drawing rather than answering another's reply. Great drawings by the way ^.^
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Drawerlous-drawer Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
True, true xD I Couldn't agree more to that! And thank you so much, you have such great artwork as well ^^
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:iconlogicalconclusions:
LogicalConclusions Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2017  Student General Artist
Thank you ^.^
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Drawerlous-drawer Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
You're very welcome!
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:iconlumen-terra:
Lumen-Terra Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
Thank you much but it's a screenshot recreation so I cheated a little bit. 
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:iconlogicalconclusions:
LogicalConclusions Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2017  Student General Artist
Sometimes it's okay to cheat as long as the end result is slightly different from the reference picture.
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:iconbuttsqaures:
buttsqaures Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2017
I don't give a shit what people say, the live action Transformer films are some of the most amazing and entertaining films I have ever watched! Thank you Michael Bay.
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:iconlumen-terra:
Lumen-Terra Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
Oh believe me I agree, they are awesome. It just got confusing when they revamped everything in AoE.

Nice to meet another Bay-verse fan! :'D
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:iconthe-fowlx:
The-Fowlx Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2017
Oh GOD, the best thing that happened to my life, you drew it
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:iconlumen-terra:
Lumen-Terra Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
Uh... Okay? xD
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:iconthe-fowlx:
The-Fowlx Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2017
I'm weird XD

i'm just addicted to this version lmao, even if he will go insane and evil soon, my heroe will be my villain now
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:iconlumen-terra:
Lumen-Terra Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
We don't know of he'll go insane... maybe it'S like in TFP and "Nemesis" is a doppelgänger? 
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Dialga22239 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, this redraw is amazing :D
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:iconlumen-terra:
Lumen-Terra Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
Took me 2 and a half hours... ;;v;;
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Gweey Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Optimus Prime!! yay!!!Kawaii [Gravity Falls] Yay Adorable Girl Anime Emoji (Lovely Mode) [V6] Adorable Girl Anime Emoji (Kawaii Eyes) [V6] Yay! such greatness in this masterpiece Lulu! 
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:iconlumen-terra:
Lumen-Terra Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
Yes it's the boss bot!
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:icongweey:
Gweey Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yay :happybounce:
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:iconprophetofprimes:
ProphetofPrimes Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great job! :la:
Sorry I'm not that great at critiques. ^^;
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:iconlumen-terra:
Lumen-Terra Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
Just say where I messed up here. That'd be a great start.
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Megan1289 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2017  Student Writer
omg I LOVE the colors!

(I'm sorry I'm not very much help but I think it looks fantastic.)
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:iconlumen-terra:
Lumen-Terra Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
I had hoped so. Blue works well with orange after all.
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