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Luminous by Lumen-Terra Luminous by Lumen-Terra
As the title says I'm experimenting with the luminosity layer mode. What do you all think?

The background is a CC licensed picture I got from pixabay. I'm allowed to be lazy.
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At the first look really pretty and amazing. It's look really shiny. The background make Lumen face to look more bright ,also the combination of colors match with Lumen's colours.
The shading is really soft. A little advice ,the tone of shading ,not everywhere , should be a little bit bigger than now.
The lighting in some parts is more glow than others. You have to be more careful. The "crystal" he has in the middle of his head should glow more , to justify the light rays. About the body anatomy look nice.
Keep up the great work! QwQb
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First I just want to say WHOA! This is absolutely jaw-dropping. I love the linework you've done right here. It's the slightest bit fuzzy but I'm blaming my laptop on this one. I really can't describe how much this piece really jumps out at me. It's perfectly coloured and well worked out.
p.s His expression here is so adorable. I need to see more adorable Lumen!!!

I can't begin to say how proud I am of this. You inspire me more everyday when I see your wonderful works. This is one of my personal favourites. Keep doing what you do, you talent filled luck charm <3 Your moon is proud indeed.

I don't know what to say improve on because I love it all! This is my first critique so I'm honestly sure I've made a idiot of myself by babbling.
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temarcia Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I think shades and highlights on him looks very nice, and kinda different from what you did before which is always interesting. And in general I like the look on him here. Pity you were lazy with the bg, it;s not super-hard to do a stars like that with a tutorial, just try and you can do that. :D
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Lumen-Terra Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
I can draw stars! *pout* 

Anyway thank you for the feedback. It's super cool when people tell me what I did well and what I could do better. I appreciate it. :D
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temarcia Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Great! And no problem! :D
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Blue-Starlights Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely!<3
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Lumen-Terra Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
:3 Thank yuuu!
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Blue-Starlights Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome bro!:3
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CryptidFriend Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2017
So cute. xD
His fangs are adorable.
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Lumen-Terra Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
Lol. If you think his fangs are cute then look at Flashback's- those are cute. Lu looks like a badass vampire! ;;v;;b
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CryptidFriend Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2017
True. But tbh, I find fangs of all shapes and sizes cute, sooooo-
Yeah. xDD
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Lumen-Terra Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
Alright. xD 
Seriously fangs are awesome. lol 
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FlashbackingArtist00 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
*lil whistle* Seems he got a polished paintjob! I like it a lot!
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Lumen-Terra Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
Thanks. ;D
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MessyArtwok Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmmm...a luminous Lumen...whoda thunk? X'D
Lol - still, he looks awesome. X3 I especially like the effect achieved in the incandescent regions of Lumen's armor - it's very cool. F3
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Lumen-Terra Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
You could say I polished my boy here to shine. xD -okay okay! No more puns! 
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MessyArtwok Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD Oh aren't you so punny:lol: 
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Lumen-Terra Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
Who me? Naah. *snickers* 
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MessyArtwok Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You lie like a rug.... X'D :rofl:
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Lumen-Terra Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
Ah. So that's why people constantly trip over me. Good to know. 
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MessyArtwok Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pffff....y-you know what...I'm just going to leave that one alone~ XD
I could probably say something witty...but...it would also be mean....
And I'm not mean. ;P All the time...
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Lumen-Terra Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
Thanks. I'm a bit peachy right now anyway... 
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Owllazuli Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow! So Lumenous~ :D
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Lumen-Terra Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
The brightest pun of the day! :dummy: 
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Owllazuli Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm sorry Lu. You know I can't stop myself .w."
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Lumen-Terra Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
You know I love your puns right? ;D
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Owllazuli Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww' so they're not that terrible after owl! ^w^
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Lumen-Terra Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
Hu hu huu. Fu-huh-nny you barn owl. xD 
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Owllazuli Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hoot hoot, that's me XD
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Lumen-Terra Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
xD I wouldn't want you any other way.
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Towerte Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017
I really like it! It's very soft but has those that lovely crispness in the highlights. I also really like how the glow from his optics reflects along the edges of his helmet.
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Lumen-Terra Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
Thanks for the feedback. I'm still trying to perfect the highlights and I'm super grateful when I get critique or praise. 
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